Jackson Jethro
Honors English 2
Book Project #2
Title: A Long Way Gone: Memoirs of a Boy Soldier
Provide the Passage With the Best Imagery
Passage: We were
in the middle of the grassland walking in single file, our shirts on our
shoulders or heads, when suddenly three rebels rose from behind the dried
grasses and pointed their guns at Gibrilla, who was in the front. They cocked
their guns, and one of the placed the muzzle of his gun under Gibrilla’s chin. “He
is scared like soaked monkey,” the rebel laughing told his companions. As the
other two walked past me, I avoided eye contact by putting my head down. The younger
rebel raised my head with his bayonet, still in its scabbard. While he was
looking at me sternly, he took the bayonet from its scabbard and attached it at
the muzzle of the gun. I trembled so hard that my lips shook. He smiled without
emotion. The rebels, none of whom were older than twenty-one, started walking
us back to the village we had passed. One was dressed in a sleeveless army
shirt and jeans, his head tied with a red cloth. The other two were dressed in
jeans jackets and pants, wearing baseball hats backwards and new Adidas
sneakers. All three wore a lot of fancy watches on both wrists. All these
things had been taken by people by force or looted from houses and shops. The
rebels said a lot of things as we walked. Whatever the said didn’t sound
friendly. I couldn’t hear their words, because all I could think about was
death. I struggled to avoid fainting.
Explanation- I
love this passage. It paints the best picture of what is actually happening to
Ishmael (the main character) and his friends that he has been with for so long
in this horrible mess of a war. The way how he explains how they are walking
through the grassland and then the build up to them being captured was so detailed
and I could really picture what was happening. The description of the rebels,
the way he made them look like bad guys because of the stolen jewelry and how
they were dressed was just fantastic. Also I like how it shows that he and the
other boys were truly scared for their lives since they have been through so
much already. They really don’t know when their last moment will be and how it
will be. This passage really just puts an outstanding image in my head and that’s
why I chose it for the best imagery.
Provide the Passage With The Best Dialogue
Passage- The man
was the first to see me. “Kushe-oo. How de body, sir?” I greeted him. His eyes
searched my smiling face. He didn’t say anything and I thought maybe he didn’t speak
Krio. So I said hello in Mende, my tribal language. “Bu-wah. Bi ga huin ye na.”
He still didn’t respond. I took my clothes off and dived into the river. When I
rose to the surface, all of them had stopped swimming but remained in the water.
The man, who must have been the father asked me, “Where are you from and where
are you going?” He was Mende and he understood Krio very well.
Explanation- This
passage shows a great build up to a conversation between Ishmael and a man that
he meets in the middle of the forest. I like how the man finally understands
him and starts questioning him. This passage shows great dialogue because of
the conversation that they had and the different language that they used within
just one talking to.